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Tuffley Primary School, Gloucester, UK
Lonley
By Bethanie, 11
I'm certainly sad, I really fear everyone, I'm scared of the dark, Nobody wants to know me, And nobody is with me. (May 2005)
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Distraught
By Peter, 10
I'm itching a lot, I'm shaking from head to toe, I'm in a dark room, I'm feeling extremely low, I know I'm really distraught. (May 2005)
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Frightened
By Zach, 11
I'm frightened you know, Nobody comes to see me, Nobody helps me, What am I going to do? Alone, I am, no one comes
(May 2005)
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Upset - Tanka
By Sophie, 10
No friends to talk to, Crying, sobbing very loudly, Tears fall from my eyes, I feel so down in the dumps, I don't like feeling upset. (May 2005)
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Scared
By Daniel, 11
I am panicking, My heart is beating faster, Somebody please help me! I am walking in the house, I am so scared I can't breath. (May 2005)
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Lonely
By Bethanie, 11
The rooms are very dark, I'm actually on my own, I'm scared of the dark, Nobody wants to know me, And nobody is with me. (May 2005)
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Lonely
By Ryan, 10
I am all alone , I have got no one beside me, I've got no one here, I am all alone in my house, I am darker than the sky. (May 2005)
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Happy
By Gracie, 11
I'm running around, I'm over the moon you see, I'm very content, I'm delighted to be here, I so love being here. (May 2005)
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Angry
By Craig, 10
My throat strangles tight, I try hard not to fight but, I band and I crash, I won't hold back the anger, I am so anger! (May 2005)
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Emotional Tanka
By Millie, 11
Laughing so much hurts, Sometimes I feel so upset, Crying makes me sad, How can I control my feelings? Emotions are frightening! (May 2005)
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Happy - Tanka
By Bret, 10
I'm feeling cool, I like to be bright, I'm happy like you, I will be happy for you, I like to feel like you. (May 2005)
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Lonely - Tanka
By Morgan, 11
No one's beside me, The shadow swallows me up, I'm always so sad, Nobody will stand with me, Always so cold and lonely. (May 2005)
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Scared - Tanka
By Pippa, 10
Scared of the darkness, Most things make me jump and scream, Kids take the mickey, Because I am scared of things, Snakes and spiders and banging. (May 2005)
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Sad - Tanka
By Jason, 11
I am very sorry, My best friend has just been killed, His mum is upset, His funeral is later, I wish he could come back now! (May 2005)
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Lonley - Tanka
By Keiran, 11
Nobody likes me, I feel so hollow every day, Happy feelings hide, I cry but no one can hear, Lonely is a sad feeling. (May 2005)
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Victorian factory
By Morgan, 11
The train builder, A child murderer, An early starter, A loud shouter, A steam spouter. (May 2005)
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Working child
By Gracie, 11
A money begger, A street walker, A silent talker, A hard worker, A pain taker, A quick waker, A heavy sleeper. (May 2005)
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Young worker
By Craig, 10
Young worker, Matchbox, Hard worker, Old clothes wearer, Money maker, Fluff scavenger, Cane lurker. (May 2005)
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Victorian Kenning - Spinning Top
By Zach, 11
A road marker, A road crasher, A spinning actor, A human befriender. (May 2005)
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Victorian chiled worker
By Jason, 11
A hard and dirty worker, A stiff mover, A poor carer, An upset singer, A trapped caller, A killed worker. (May 2005)
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Victorian mill machine
By Bethanie, 11
A fluff maker, A cotton turner, A heavy slaughter, A children chopper, A fast mover, A hard worker, A crazy machine. (May 2005)
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Victorian Teacher - kenning
By Paul, 10
Quick walker, Strick talker, Fast writer, A heavy stalker, Cane snapper, An extreme starer, Dunce creator. (May 2005)
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