The volcano

By Rosanna, 11

The volcano is a stamping Elephant,
Who always gets his own way,
He spits around fire all day.

The klinking and klanking of tumbling rocks,
The Elephant moans moans moans
The stamping Elephant groans.
(January 2007)

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THE VOLCANO

By Oliver, 10

A volcano is a bear.
Black and furious,
He`s an accident waiting to happen,
With his raging temper and fiery claws
Forever is he entitled to the fire in his jaws.
(January 2007)

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The volcano

By Shaun, 10

The volcano is a raging lion
Red and fierce,
He roars and gallops all day long,
With his dirty nails and glamorous jaws,
Upon the island he lays his paws.

On the island he lays his paws
Then the lion just roars,
His hair is lava as red as fire,
And because he is so sparkling
Everyone says - the light is smiling on us!

The rumbling, tumbling stones
Is the sound of Lions groans,
In the morning he hears a horn,
Then he does a booming
YAWN!
(January 2007)

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The Volcano

By Neesha and Lydia , 10

The Volcano is a snake
Different colours,
The snake hissing like
The lava clashing
Against the volcano

The snake is angry
So he hisses and hisses
Like the volcano
Moaning

The volcano is a snake
Yellow and black,
He creeps up on you
Like lava clashing on
The rocks

The snake gets angry
And turns as red as a
Radish so he goes off
Moaning and groaning.
(January 2007)

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Volcano

By Amelia, 10

Volcano lava is a poisonous snake,
Red and bumpy and black,
It charges down a rocky path,
To frighten all the people.

The lavas scolding hot,
Intended to burn you - kill you,
Racing after you never giving up,
`Hiss Hiss` is the noise it makes,

As red as strawberries,
As black as charcoal,
Speeding after you -
Watch out!
Chasing after you never giving up,
It says
`DIE!`
(January 2007)

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The volcano

By Kayleigh and Chloe, 10

The rumbling volcano is as big as an elephant.
Giant and grey,
Ready to erupt every day.
With a squirting nose and a bursting roof .
Do not get in the way or you will go puff.

The volcano sounds like a moaning child,
The elephant stomps like a Towtruck.
The earache noise makes the ground shake
(January 2007)

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Volcano!!!

By Faye, 10

A volcano is an angry elephant,
Never happy nor pleased,
He will explode with anger,
If he`s ever teased.

The volcano is as big ten elephants,
With one big one inside,
He stands tall in his volcano,
Watching his jungle with pride.

The volcano`s top is a giant eye,
Ready to burst out in tears,
And while it peers at the sky,
And unleashed are the animal's fears.

You hear it from ten miles away,
When it begins to rumble,
Lava spouts everywhere,
When it starts to crumble.

The jungle had disappeared,
Nothing left at all,
The monkeys were not happy,
Particularly the one called Paul.
(January 2007)

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Volcano

By Scarlett, 10

The volcano is a python.
Yellow and black,
He creeps up behind you,
When you least expect it
On your back,
Venom venom venom.

He spits to warn you,
He`s as angry as a stormy night,
You better be careful or he might bight,
Venom venom venom.
(January 2007)

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The volcano

By Liam , 11

The volcano is a gorilla,
Fast and destructive,
He stumbles on the mountains all day,
With his raging hands and crashing feet,
Day upon day he destroys,

The angry stones
And bones, bones, bones, bones!
The giant gorilla moans,
Wiping his greasy hands
(January 2007)

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Volcano of lava

By Ben, 10

The volcano is an empty whale
Giant and brown.
Who stays all day
And watches the town.

Rumbling its tummy
Hungry for food.
Soon it will spill.
Lava so smooth.

If it hits
People will die.
Towns will be lost
And babies will cry.

Editor's Choice of best personification poem, January 2007

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The volcano

By Lucia, 11

A volcano is a ferocious man eating Tiger,
Red like fire and black like coal,
He roars on the mountain all day long .

With his nasty blood thirsty mind and his sharp white teeth,
He storms down the mounting tops.
(January 2007)

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Volcano

By Denisha, 10

A volcano is like a hissing cobra,
Tall and swaying high,
It slithers down the steep hill,
Waiting to spit at all the people to kill them
And watch them die.

It`s deadly eyes are glaring at you,
The volcano lava is running blood,
The redness is a burning red,
Sore and bubbling hot.

It`s sliding towards you,
Watch out it`s got you!!!!!!!!!!.
(January 2007)

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The volcano

By Rosie, 10

A volcano is a squirting elephant,
Giant and grey,
He bathes in the water all day,
With his big body and long trunk.

The shaking, shaking mud,
The giant elephant moans,
Then he squirts water like a volcano erupting.
(January 2007)

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Roar

By Lauren, 10

The volcano is like a furious lion
Waiting to erupt
The lava`s destroyed the entire town
The mayors going to have an expensive bill.

Its rocks are always tumbling like falling grains of sand,
As lions fall from the shot of the hunters
The hunters in the country.
(January 2007)

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The Volcano

By Alex, 10

The volcano erupting,
Like a fierce snake spitting,
As it twists and turns on the way to the lake.
When it goes venom, venom, venom.

It spits and screams,
As it slithers down to the stream,
As the cobra is so mean,
When it goes venom, venom, venom.

It waggles its way,
Down to catch its crawling prey,
It pops and bursts through the curse,
When it goes venom, venom, venom.
(January 2007)

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