Three billy goats gruff
By Brad & Jono, 10 & 11
One day Goat's want to go Over to the other side to the other side to eat grass bad troll
First goat Went over the bridge the troll jump up shouting who that crossing ovver bridge bad troll
second goat went over the bridge the troll jump who that crossing my bridge
third goat went over bridge the troll jump shouting who that crassing my bridge dead troll (January 2005)
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Little Red Riding Hood (Cinquain)
By Oscar and Luke, 10
One day There was a girl Called little Red Riding Hood. Who went through the woods alone Brave girl
Knock Knock! Come in darling What a big nose you have What big eyes and teeth you have gran Uh Oh
Granny Where have you gone woodcutter help help quick In he rushed and killed the wolf The end (January 2005)
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Snow White - Cinquain
By Carmel and Katie, 10
In woods, Snow white got lost, The queen wanted her dead, The hunter could not kill snow white, She ran.
Queen mad, Mirror on wall, Bad queen smashed the mirror, But Snow White was fairest of all, She skipped.
Dwarfs' house, Snow white goes in, Dwarfs come back from their work, They are very surprised at her, And scared,
They ask, Why she is there, She tells them what happened, Queen is still very mad at her, Bad luck.
One day, She gets poisoned, With the apple she ate, The dwarfs are sad and unhappy, Sad time.
Prince comes, He sees snow white, He gives her a kiss, Then magically she wakes up, The end. (January 2005)
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Three little pigs - cinquain
By Bethany and Kelly, 11 and 10
One day One little pig Came walking down the road The pig looked for sticks for his house To build.
Next day Another pig To build his house safe from the wolf He built.
Next came The smallest pig Looking places for bricks Then he began to build his house All done.
Later A big bad wolf Blew the house os sticks down The pig ran into the house of straw frightend.
Straw house Suddenly droped They ran to the next house The wolf could not blow the bricks down All safe. (January 2005)
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Sleeping Beauty (cinquain)
By Ashleigh & Beth, 10 & 11
Princess, Asleep in cot, While faries cast their spells, Suddenly a evil witch appears, BANG CRASH.
Baby, Pricks her finger On her sixteenth birthday, Falls asleep for one hundred years, oh no.
Prince comes And breaks the spell, Dragon comes prince kills it, Prince fights through bushes of hawthorns, Hero. (January 2005)
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Hare and tortoise (cinquain)
By Matthew, Jordan and Jordan, 10
Tortoise was very slow could not run like the hare he was a confident tortoise brave thing Fast hare was very quick he could run miles and miles the hare knew he was going to win quick thing The race The hare went fast faster than the tortoise The hare was winning by a bit speedy tired hare hare fell asleep then the tortoise caught up good tortoise passes the finish HOORAY! (January 2005)
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The Little Red Hen (cinquain)
By Katie, 11 years
one day little red hen found a seed on the ground witch one of you will help me plant NOT US !!!
NEXT DAY little red hen needed to water seed witch one of you will help water the seed Later little red hen chopped down all of the weet will you help me cut down the weet NO WAY !!! GRINDING Does it alone she makes a big cake now who will help me eat the cake WE WILL !!!
Not now you did not help you do not get the cake I made it and I will eat it the end (January 2005)
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Christmas morning
By Christopher, 10
waking snowy morning mince pies and milk gone children playing having fun thank you (January 2005)
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Sleeping Beauty (cinquain)
By Natalie and Melissa, 11
Princess Lives at palace Evil witch casts a spell So the faries grant her wishes Save her
Fairies Take Beauty home To save from the witch She meets her love in the forest Happy
Next year She goes back home To her Mum and her Dad It is her big sixteenth birthday Today
Lovely Princess Beauty Pricks finger on a wheel Beauty waits for her handsome prince Breaks spell
Princess Lives happily With her husband Charming In a big castle on a hill Merry (January 2005)
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Three Billly Goats Gruff (cinquain)
By Kristian and Liam, 10
One Day Three billy goats Trotted over the bridge Fee, fi, fo, fum I smell goats blood Bad troll
Small Goat Trip trap he went You have trespassed on here Please let me go across the bridge Ok Mum Goat Trip, trap she went Oh no not another Please let me across the bridge Ok
Dad Goat Let me across Or else I will kill you And head butted him off the bridge The end (January 2005)
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Glenn who stole the hen (limerick)
By Amie, 10
There was a young boy called Glenn Who decided to try and steal a hen He went into the farm And set off the alarm That foolish young boy called Glenn. (January 2005)
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Old man called Frank
By Ricci, 10
There was an old man called Frank who fell down a river bank he fell in a river and had a cold shiver he couldn't get out and he sank (January 2005)
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