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Bens, vets, hummer, jets

By Austin, 14, Grade 8, Chiddix Junior High School, Normal, IL, USA

Hi! My name is Jake and I just turned 18. It is year 2075 and I just found the sweetest SUV. It's a 2001 Hummer; I bought it for $3,000. I noticed something that I have not noticed in all the other Hummers that I've been looking at. It had a little button on the dashboard that said Bad Boy. I looked in the back and there were three boosters.
But when I bought it and I took it out for the first time to see how fast it went there was a little bit of a problem. I was out on the highway and I was listening to 196.9 FM hard rock. Whoa! I had it up to
185 and I noticed that everything had been changing. All the views around me have
Changed. I was rolling by houses and all of a sudden and it looked like a house in a picture that my Grandma showed me from a house of the 60's. I thought was I in the 60's or did I just take a wrong turn? Everybody was looking at me because I had my stereo cranked up.
I was in a small town and all of a sudden on the radio, James Brown came on. It was
R-O-C-K in the USA. But I thought I was listening to that Hard Rock station. I parked my Hummer and everyone was asking, "Where are you from and what are you doing?
"Here? What are you driving? I have never seen that before."
After about 5 minutes, people were coming up and talking to me. I noticed this kid and asked him a question. I said, "Where am I?" Ron answered, "You are in North Carolina. Where did you think you were?"
I said, "I don't know, where in North Carolina."
He replied, "Chapel Hill." I asked him where the college was. He said, "College, there is no college here." I said, "What do you do after High School?" He said, "Work." I said, "You don't go to college at all?" He replied, "Yea." Well, we talked for about 10 minutes and I told him that my name was Jake. I told him I didn't know how long I would be there and asked him to show me around. He said I could stay at his house.
I found out I was in the year 1969. It had been three days and I found myself dressing, acting, and talking different. (All because of my new friend, Ron.)
I asked Ron about any ladies in town. He took me to a place called Sandy's drive-in. I met some fine looking ladies there. I asked him what I could do to help him since he has helped me so much. He said, "You remember, Heather? I said, "Yea." He said, "I think she's pretty hot." I said, "Wait, you think she's phat?" He hit me for it. He said, you don't call girls fat. I said, "No, I wasn't meaning it as FAT; I was meaning it as PHAT." (Pretty hot and tempting). He asked me to talk to her and see what she thought about him. I said, "Yea, I could do that."
That next day Ron's mom signed me up for school. I saw Heather that same day. I
Was like, "Hey, Heather." She said, "Hey, Jake." I said, you remember, Ron, right? She goes, "Yea, I know Ron. I said, "What do you think about him?" She replied stuttering, "I think he's really far out." I said, "Seriously?" She said, "He's groovy. Jake, you can't tell Ron that." I said, "Okay."
Then I saw Ron and said, "Ron, come here" We were rolling in the Hummer and I told
Him exactly everything that Heather said. He said, "Really, Heather likes me?" I said,"Yea, I think she does." Ron answers, "That's far out. Ya that's groovy, right."
It has been one whole month and Ron and Heather have been together. I was looking at the hummer and the radio was on. I had been working to try to figure out how I got to the 60s, and it was the boosters and the radio. When I got on a certain stations. The booster kicked in and we were off. I told Ron I might try and see if I fixed the Hummer. I told him too not to tell anyone that I was leaving. Two days later, I was going to try this out. Ron said, "Wait, can you take me to The Barn?" The Barn was the place where couples hang out. He said, "Come here." Why? I have to get going," I replied. I walked in and everyone yelled surprise!!!! "What's this? No one has thrown me a surprise party before," I responded. Everyone said goodbye. I told him not to tell anybody that I was trying to get back and I told his Mom and all of my friend's thanks for letting me stay. That night at 9:00 I turned on the radio to power 207.5 FM, got the Hummer up to 185 mph and I was back in the year 2075. I looked at the time and I wasn't even gone 12 hours.

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