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Trip to Venus

By Jeremy, 14

Ned Gram never worried about his job. In his eyes it was the best job he could have asked for. Every little kid including Ned at one time or another had dreamed of being an astronaut. Well Ned’s dream came true. He had only 1 trip to space just to orbit the earth for some test. There he faced death when the oxygen tank fell out. Yet he was Okay. It was 5 years since that has happened.
Ned was lying in his bed watching the news and he heard of a new heat resistant suit made by NASA, being into astronomy he got really excited. That night he had many dreams about going into space again. Then he got woke up by the phone ringing. He picked it up and the voice on the other line said.
“ Hello I am from KLW would you be interested in buying a new computer 100 kilowatt hard drive.”
“No, thank you,” said guy he hung up the phone and went back to bed disappointed. He really was hoping it was NASA calling to ask him if he wanted to go to space.
After a couple of days Ned had lost hope. He convinced himself that maybe it was a little too dangerous. He even knew he was lying to himself but he refused to admit it.
The phone rang, but this time he picked it up and indeed it was NASA and they wanted him to go to space and travel to Venus. They mentioned that it was still to early to go to the Sun or even Mercury. He was told about his 3 other crewmembers. Guy Coffee, Will Valentine, and Hannah Davis, he was assigned to be there in 3 days.
He told everyone he knew the good news. He barely goy any sleep that night. The next morning he packed his bags, put them in the trunk and headed out.
When he got to the hotel room he heard about the mission and farther things about the suit. In fact he actually heard his name he would go down in history. The next day he would go for training.
Then he finally arrived there. The leader was John Mar. He said, “We will be having 3 simulations. Two will be some you have already experienced and one will be brand new. You will have to learn to work together. First you will have to learn how to handle something if anything goes wrong.”
So they headed into the practice ship “The engine has failed what do you do?” said John.
“We pull this lever, and press these buttons,” said Guy
“No we twist this knob and press these buttons,” said Ned. After a long argument they started to push each other then it broke out into a violent fight.” They had to come in and force the 2 away from each other.
The crewmembers ran the last two tests alone. One was to use their heat resistant and oxygen suits. The next was one that was used to classify items that might be found in space. After all those were done it was time for them to launch off.
There were thousands of excited people waiting there that day to see the rocket that was going to land on Venus. The proud crew of 4 was walking onto the ship and awaited departure. The crowed counted down 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1… blast off. Then the crew went into space.
Ned loved it in space it was an escape from the sounds of Earth the pollution. To Ned all his problems on Earth meant nothing in space.
Even better Ned and Guy stopped fighting, they eventually became friends. They spent most of their time talking about their lives and their families.
Then after about a month they landed on Venus. They had to put on their suits and step out on Venus. Willie Valentine was going to be the first one to step on Venus. He said these famous words. “I have seen and done everything.”
The rest except Guy (who orbited it) steeped on. It looked as one big open valley, compared to where he has been before. It was also a dream. Ned always used to look up in space and saw Venus, but he never really thought he would go up there. Then he thought to himself “Gosh what an experience this is.”
Walking around and picking up materials from Venus he picked up something squashy. It resembled nothing he had studied before. He was passing it from hand to hand trying to see if it reassembles anything it didn’t.
Then he felt a huge pain in his hand he looked down and he saw nothing but mussel his skin was eaten away. He drooped it and it ripped through the material and ate away at the rest of his body.
The rest of the members did not want that to happen to them so they ran to the ship and departed back to earth. It was a very remorseful ride home.
Then they landed back on earth. They told NASA and the rest of the world all about what happened to Ned. With the death they realized there is life on other planets.

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